Thursday, November 10, 2011

When my hair said 'WOW'

My hair and the Dove looks

My composition:

Do I care enough for my hair?

Every night I dream of waking up

With a bright sun and a hot tea cup

I wish there would be no more lost strands of hair

About whom the pillow would make me aware

Alas it stays a dream like in those fictional stories

The hair has to pay for all the life’s worries

The dust, the dirt and the chemicals

Everyday badly ruin my curls

Struggling to find their vitamins and oils

Most evenings, they look like tangled coils

Smoothness and volume are my prima desires

Lustrous and shiny hair and not dead wires.

Nourishment and vitamins- I found in one

Where harmful effects are absolutely none

Makes my hair such shiny, smooth and beautiful

Even at the end of the day they stay wonderful

I am thankful to Dove, for bringing back the confidence

And making my hair lovely and dense.

Meri Ma ke nuskhe:

1. I wash my hair with beer for conditioning and it actually works.

2. When I get dandruff my mother applies thick curd on the roots.

3. When I want to feel awesome, I use the Dove Vita Care :)

This post is a part of Indiblogger and Dove contest:

Love is a two way street: Love your hair and it loves you back!


  1. Poorvi, very beautiful poem.. 'Alas it stays a dream like in those fictional stories' wow, superb.. All the best :-)

    Someone is Special

  2. @Someone Thanks :) .. n same to you ..

  3. Well written post :) Very sweet poem
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  5. पूर्वी अपन के सिर के बाल ही छुट्टी पर जा रहे हैं..........खूबसूरत कविता....

  6. very beautiful take on hair, excellent choice of words. very illustrious read.